From: Helge Kreutzmann <debian@helgefjell.de>
Date: Mon, 21 Apr 2008 17:38:47 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: Clarify dpkg-source man page as agreed to on debian-dpkg
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Clarify dpkg-source man page as agreed to on debian-dpkg
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diff --git a/debian/changelog b/debian/changelog
index aa3a9bb3..37861b38 100644
--- a/debian/changelog
+++ b/debian/changelog
@@ -14,6 +14,9 @@ dpkg (1.14.19) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
   * Fix dpkg-genchanges to detect udeb based on Package-Type control
     header instead of file extension analysis on uploaded files.
     Closes: #476113
+  
+  [ Helge Kreutzmann ]
+  * Minor fixes and clarifications to man pages.
 
   [ Updated dpkg translations ]
   * Galician (Jacobo Tarrio).
diff --git a/man/ChangeLog b/man/ChangeLog
index b6b2e49c..8979be13 100644
--- a/man/ChangeLog
+++ b/man/ChangeLog
@@ -1,3 +1,8 @@
+2008-04-21  Helge Kreutzmann  <debian@helgefjell.de>
+
+	* dpkg-shlibdeps.1: Fix a typo
+	* dpkg-source.1: Improve a sentence (with agreement from Raphäel)
+
 2008-04-21  Helge Kreutzmann  <debian@helgefjell.de>
 
 	* po/de.po: Updated to 1580t0f20u.
diff --git a/man/dpkg-source.1 b/man/dpkg-source.1
index d578e3ad..b8c3550c 100644
--- a/man/dpkg-source.1
+++ b/man/dpkg-source.1
@@ -451,8 +451,8 @@ Before going any further, some checks are done to ensure that we
 don't have any non-ignored uncommitted changes.
 .PP
 Then the VCS specific part of the source directory is copied over to a
-temporary directory. Before being packed in a tarball, various cleanup are
-done to save space.
+temporary directory. Before this temporary directory is packed in a tarball,
+various cleanup are done to save space.
 .SH BUGS
 The point at which field overriding occurs compared to certain
 standard output field settings is rather confused.